I got the second chapter of A Web of Colors done! If you like it please review. If you don't like it please review!!! Oh and if you have suggestions for a better title (for ANY of my stories) it would greatly appreciated if you let me know in the comments.
SCARLET
CARMINE KNEW HER GRANDMA WAS STRANGE. Man, Ona had practically invented strange, but
this crossed even her border of strange and completely loco.
Scarlet sat on the floor of their tiny apartment
staring up at her grandma. Ona was singing and dancing as though it were a ball
with dancers surrounded her, dancing to her music. But Ona was having a hard
time keeping up with beats of her own music. Scarlet’s feet ached in sympathy
for Ona’s imaginary dance partner, remembering then time she made the mistake
of joining in. Despite her dancing ware of pink bunny slippers and a bathrobe,
Ona still managed to pierce the feet of anyone dancing with her.
“La la la Love ain't here anymore.” Ona sung her
favorite waltz music.
She continued to sing and dance to the imaginary music,
while Scarlet mental rewound the last hour.
She remembered waking up to Ona’s wrinkly face
framed by frizzy gray hair.
“Awaken, awaken, my child
for day has not yet come so we must sing and dance to wake the sun from its own
slumber.” Ona
had said. She seemed to get crazier every day!
Scarlet knew she wasn’t going to school today. It
was one of Ona’s bad days where her wits were nearly nonexistent.
Scarlet knew her friends; Jet, Violet, and Forrest;
would cover for her as they always did. Sometime later in the day one of her
friends would come over to give her the day’s homework.
It seemed like a cruel twist of fate. Scarlet
would have to spend the next twenty-four hours making sure Ona didn’t decide to
jump off a cliff while her friends got to dive into the abyss that was William
Shakespeare’s works. Lucky.
Scarlet leaned back against the taupe wallpaper
thinking, I wish I could turn this silent
room into that classroom where- wait silent room?
She jerked up, eyes searching around the room to
see Ona sprawled across the carpet.
“ONA!” Scarlet screeched pure terror in her voice.
Much to Scarlet’s relief, Ona jerked her head up
almost banging it back down again on the coffee table.
Only there was one problem, Garnet had been dead
for five years. In one year, Scarlet had lost her parents and her grandpa. And
if she wasn’t careful she was going to lose her grandma, too.
“No, no Puppy why must you leave me!?” Ona bawled,
“You were so young, so YOUNG!”
Scarlet held back laughter. The only thing that
stood in her way was five years of taking care of her strange grandma. But
there were still moments when she could barely contain her laughter. Like now,
with Ona on the floor cradling her purple puppy stuffed animal that their cat,
Bebe, had “killed”. Bebe sat on the
couch now with a perplexed look on her calico face. Scarlet couldn’t blame her.
If I was a cat and my owner was bawling
all over my stuffed animal chew toy, I would be confused, too. No matter how
often events like this happen.
“Why? Why? Why? WHY!?” Ona sobbed interrupting
Scarlet’s thoughts by grabbing her shirt and sobbing all of it.
“It’s okay, Ona. Puppy is um in a better place.”
Scarlet comforted stroking her grandmother’s hair.
Ona pulled back, her eyes rimmed red. “Bu- But”
Ona bit her lip.
“Yes?” Scarlet prodded gently.
“I want her back,” Ona screamed before bursting back into tears.
“I want her back,” Ona screamed before bursting back into tears.
“Yes I know, I understand.”
“No, you don’t!” Ona cried stubbornly, “No one
understands!”
“I do.”
“No, you don’t.” Ona declared almost
challengingly.
“Yes, I do.”
“No, you don’t”
“Yes, I do.”
“No, you don’t!” The cat’s head swiveled back and
forth as though watching an intense game of tennis.
“Yes, I do.”
“No, you don’t!”
“Yes, I do.”
“NO, YOU DON’T!” Ona howled with grief, “I am
alone in my anguish.”
“Well then,” Scarlet smirked knowing how to get
Ona back to her non-grieving self, “If you are mourning so much I guess you
can’t eat this bag of MNM’s,” she sighed holding up a bag of MNM’S dejectedly
as though it were a true tragedy.
Ona’s eyes watched the swinging bag greedily, her
previous grief forgotten. “Gimme!” she pounced on the bag in a way that Bebe
would surely be jealous of.
Ona struggled to open the bag using her teeth, but
only succeeded in making it stretch, like taffy.
Scarlet sighed, “Let me see, I will open it for
you.” She picked up the slimy bag and ripped it open to reveal a colorful
variation of colors.
“CANDY!” Ona screeched practically popping
Scarlet’s eardrums in the process.
She grabbed one handful after the other, shoving
into her mouth with all the grace of a gorilla.
“MORE CANDY?” Ona asked spluttering sticky MNM’s
all over Scarlet and the carpet.
“Gross,” Scarlet muttered brushing a stray MNM of
her arm.
-BANG- -BANG- -BANG-
-BANG-
“What-“Scarlet started.
-BANG- -BANG- -BANG-
-BANG-
“Is-“
-BANG- -BANG- -BANG-
-BANG-
“That?” she finished.
-BANG- -BANG- -BANG-
-BANG-
Scarlet turned toward Ona who was happily playing
on the floor with beheaded dog, completely unaware of the banging noise.
-BANG- -BANG- -BANG-
-BANG-
“You stay here,” Scarlet ordered picking herself
up from the floor.
-BANG- -BANG- -BANG-
-BANG-
Ona looked up and obediently replied, “Okay! Puppy
will keep me company!”
-BANG- -BANG- -BANG-
-BANG-
Scarlet shot out their front door. Instantly she
was blinded by a glaring light that seemed to take up the whole hallway. When
her eyes got adjusted, Scarlet saw the hall.
Was a complete madhouse.
Some people ran in and out of random doorways.
Others hid behind overturned furniture. Still others just stood still and
screamed their lungs raw.
And in the
center of the storm was a robot.
It was easily the size of a small car with giant pincer-like claws on either end. They were intended for smashing prey, yet
Scarlet couldn’t help but wonder how it held a pencil. However, its face was
the scariest part. It was a swirling mask of horror that made Scarlet dizzy
just looking at it. Trying not to get nauseous, she focused on the robot’s
lower half. Its body was entirely made of glass, with a t-shirt covering its
torso that boldly stated “Death to pepperoni! Taco is the king!”
That’s when Scarlet really got mad. “Oh, no! Oh
you did not just insult pepperoni!”
The robot tilted his head –making Scarlet sick to
her stomach- as though confused, “Why do you not lose your head, human?” It
intoned.
Scarlet ignored its question. Still bubbling with
anger, she ran toward the robot screaming, “For you, pepperoni!”
It reared up in front of her, before stating, “I
will squash you like a bug,”
It’s speech isn’t very
original, but it’s scary enough. I need to change my approach.
Scarlet darted into a nearby doorway looking for
something to use as a weapon.
The first thing to hit her was the smell. It smelt
nice, which usually when something smells good you don’t notice straight off
the bat, but Scarlet did. She had lived in the same apartment with Ona for five
years now, and in those years she had gotten used to the scent of disinfectant,
and the slimy odor of the medicine Ona takes. This apartment smelled like
caramel. Her mother had perfume that smelt like caramel. Scarlet’s eyes began
to get watery thinking of her.
Focus! She told herself clearing
away the unshed tears.
The apartment was so similar to her own it gave
her the vertigo just by looking at it.
It had same wooden flooring, but instead of taupe wallpaper it had blue flowery
wallpaper with orange trim that made an odd combination. But the layout was the
same: kitchen in the back left corner, bathrooms and bedrooms to the right, and
a small living room nestled in the middle.
A broom and dust pan lay dejectedly in the middle
of the floor, dust still floating in the air as though someone had just thrown
it up in fright.
-BANG- -BANG- ,
the monster reminded her.
“Coming!” Scarlet muttered like an annoyed teen
yelling at her parents.
She turned back toward the broom, and shrugged,
“That’ll have to do.”
Seconds later, she ran out the door armed with a
fearsome broom, prepared to dust the robot to death.
“Eat straw, Taco Man,” Scarlet yelled.
-CHOMP-
“Huh, you actually eat straw!” Scarlet deadpanned
staring at the stump left of her broom.
The robot cackled, “HA-HA ha! You may be immune to
the A-2243, but I will still destroy you the old-fashion way.”
Its claws begin to change into something much
worse. Scarlet could only watch frozen in horror. Screams still came from the
people around her, but somehow it all seemed distant like she was watching a
movie about some stranger named Scarlet Carmine. Not living her life.
“I WILL DESTROY YOUR WORLD!” the robot intoned
pointing the weapon at her head.
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